| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - I liked the description of the classes -- it made the chapter long and full of exposition, but Witness Stone is so different from Hogwarts, it is wonderful to see how much thought you have put into describing each class.The last few chapters have mostly been about introducing us to Marissa's world, and the cast of characters, so it is nice to see the story getting back to the main plot.
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