| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - I found that lacking in this book and it reads as if the author did not check over it once he had written it, or that he had a picture in his head of how the scene plays out but forgets that the readers have no such insight.I have no doubt that the author has quite the imagination and his telling of the story is not too shabby; but if this book were a woman, she is definitely not my type.
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