Thanks, Nathan. :)Suzan said, on 4/10/2012 2:14:00 PMAnd how about: it is not your book + it is not about you and your edit.I have run into a couple of people in critique groups who like to get on their soapbox while critiquing a person's work - most of their comments are turned around to focus on them, instead of the author. (Example, I didn't like your paragraph because I have read extensively that p