| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - Also, I think you mean The only thing frightening about Yorkshirre... not to Yorkshirre.Paragraph 6: Instead of too warn out it should be too worn outParagraph 8: I think you mean "sits in his mansion playing chess" not playing chestParagraph 11: The last sentence is an example of where you shift, probably accidentally, from present tense to past tense.
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