| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - the story was usual but he is never the case, its the narration n how good u bring the theme out that matters, or else every god-damn-it bollywood movie would have flunked at the box office, including dabangg..it could have been terser n the climax was a give-away but yes a nice read for sure..u have honesty in ur writing, i would visit again..best wishes n keep writing n improving :)best wishes for
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