| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - do not make it your last. you need mostly to self-edit a bit; lines like instrumental-driven tuneare just 'eh?' and although your points are usually correct they are sometimes redundant or not concise enough; writing non-track-by-tracks will help you in this. try to stick to 4 or 5 paragraphs, and elaborate on the points that pop up more than once in one place rather than dotted around.
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