| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - I tend to like to know the characters a bit before their lives are torn apart...in a manner.Great job, thanks for sharing.ReplyDeleteDavidDecember 4, 2010 at 10:49 AMThe first line does a nice job of establishing Caroline's precarious situation and the smoky room with its masked patrons adds nicely to the tension.There were a couple things that took me out of the moment:- How does she know the bla
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