| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - The lack of 5 stars has more to do with a kind of overdoing it, some belabored imagery (I mean really, a paragraph/page about his tongue in her mouth? it is textually relevant, but hit too many keys at once) and not as much of an emotional/narrative payoff as I was hoping for, especially since the rest of it hangs together so luminously.
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