| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - There is also no indication of any fable elements (except possibly the name 'Tom Foole', which sounds deliberate, like Tom Riddle or Jack Frost) - that is not necessarily a bad thing, but if all you have got in the opening is a garden and a wife, a little hint of the fable might help to raise the interest a bit.For those reasons, I probably would not read on - I think it needs a stronger hook first.
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