| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - Spark128401-26-2007, 02:54 PMthe second acoustic riff is odd. the rest of the riffing is great and for a first song this is very impressive. i dont see a porblem with your transitions myself, its sumthing different asiide from the fade into and from. some things are a little out of tune but that could just be a common mistake. your solo needs work too, aside from being too quite its out of key. ov
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