| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - Had I been wrong my entire life?Had I been fed lies about everything for as long as I could remember? - I loved this ending, particularly as you used questions when Regulus had just been talking about doubt... it just works so effectively.Just a tiny nitpick - you wrote when he continued he sounded so matter-of-factly (it is quite near the end) and it should be matter-of-fact.
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