| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - I like the originality of the setting, the characters, and the lure of the story, and would love to read more.There are a few errors in there with incorrect words etc. but I get the impression that this is a work in progress and, if you are looking for feedback on the concept rather than presenting this as a polished, finished, article, then this is not any great problem to my mind.
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