| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - Excellent story again!Just a couple corrections I may have noticed, not too big of a dealAs she entered her home after taking off and placing her shoes politely by the door, she almost immediately noticed the smell of cooked food.This sentence could probably flow better if you used a comma after home or by rewording the sentence, such as as she entered her home, Yuki placed her shoes politely b
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