| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 Hmm, this is pretty good, but there are a few things I would suggest you think about revising as far as your punctuation goes: first of all, your use of an interrobang (at the ends of lines two & four) seems almost melodramatic and more suited to an instant messaging conversation than a poem, and does not really lend anything to the piece.
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