| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - 1971975.htmlReplyDeletewuxmup8 June 2011 at 19:11I am on the other side of the Atlantic and beyond a further mountain barrier, and the poem is awful here too.Clunky, as you say: no focus, details that go nowhere, no euphony to speak of, dull vocabulary, silver-platter topic, dove of peace, misty resolution. (Doves, of course, have wishbones: mystery solved?) Of course, it does suggest that war is t
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