| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - The other issue here is for a suicidal hurt/comfort fic it feels bland there is not really much to it that would make a person shed a tear or feel sympathy for the character I get that Double Dee had a friendship with Lucy aka Keade but because Dark Bloody Report was rushed there was barely any character development between the two especially since in this story revealed that Double Dee had feeling
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