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http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value	I was going to say most of the stuff you have said... but mostly for me, it is the rambly thing - you need to have more confident phrasing, and it seems like you are trying to play for playings sake, leave some room to breathe!
http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#wasQuotedFrom	ultimate-guitar.com