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http://www.w3.org/1999/02/22-rdf-syntax-ns#type	http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#Entity
http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value	Granted, this is only the first chapter of a completed story and I do not know what your writing has become in later chapters but the commas is an issue that jumped at me right away and turned me away from the story.
http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#wasQuotedFrom	fictionpress.com