| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - The reader sees this coming from the get-go and dragging it out just insults the reader's intelligence.In addition, the writer seems very uncomfortable telling the story as the narrator; perhaps he would have achieved more flow by writing in the first-person.There were a couple of very odd elements included, which reveal none too subtle prejudices on the part of Sid and/or the author himself.
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