| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - Still, I do have a few gripes:I am really not keen on the exclamation mark in 'from outside!'I am not sure about the repetition of curse in the second line, mostly because of the awkward switch from 'cursed' to 'cursing'; I would suggest eliminating the first one, and have her dash for the door, cursing this and cursing that.A couple of the sentences run a fraction too long for me, especially in this pa
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