| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - thanks for tackling the issue...I agree with Victoria, just a bit of tweaking of the rhyming meter, and you have got a masterpiece...also, I know it was for clarity, but you didn't need to add the comment at the end...it sort of detracts from the message...when you write, write unapologetically...whether its about you, someone you know or simply fictional...
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