| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - True, it makes it more believable that she would be thinking rambling self-regarding backstory-insertion thoughts at us poor readers, but why would we want to read on when the first thing we get subjected to upon opening your book is a bunch of rambling self-regarding backstory?(Aaaand, trotting out my trademark criticism...) Your story does not start here.
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