| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - My only criticism would be it feels a bit rushed in places, especially some of the time jumps which are odd given the narrative style, but overall it is a solid, entertaining story.Prompt: Second personThis is actually a good and unusual use of second person, in that it is actually from the viewpoint of a canon character (Pinkie Pie) rather than yet another 'reader in Equestria'.
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