| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - hings that you assume the reader should know. the first two paragraphs for instance are your take on the genre which do not really say anything other than children listen to bad music in general. try branching out your thoughts more and definitely go into detail with more of the songs on the album. will not neg because this could have been a terrible tbt of a terrible album so good job avoiding that.b
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