| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - safa'at keruth chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 The concept of Malik dying is quite interesting - it certainly makes for a very captivating AU. Rishid's guilt was well-written and real, and his characterization was good except for the parts where he is 'screaming' at Ishizu and being unreasonable - although being unreasonable in his grief is fine, I think that Rishid's too accustomed to keeping his feelings h
|
