| http://www.w3.org/ns/prov#value | - hi first time writing a critique in here. >< (oh and i found your work form CRfolder)so'bout the drawing: one immediate problem i see is that they are not...distinct enough. maybe make use of shadows and highlights to define the edges and other places, eg neck, and you missed out shadows of clothes onthe peopleand yeah you pointed out the fire, try drawing with more, flowy shapes, and fire usually
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